Her heart seems hollow, to the heirs of  hypocrisy..

 They don’t know , her heart is an ardor of  intimacy.

 She has the power to  keep  and the courage to  let go…

 She is the SPACE, in which, the life can  grow.

 The empty spaces in her heart , don’t mean she’s wrong,,

 They are an omen, that she indeed , is very  strong !!

 For , she can create spaces to  grow

To  live ,  adapt  and love to  flow!!

 Don’t ever perceive her to not to be  strong!!!

 Because, maybe…her heart is just empty ,,

Until…..the right person comes along !


27 thoughts on “Her pneumatic heart…

      1. No wonder your poem’s all about spaces.. must be so thrilled with learning the structures through the million named spaces that it’s even flowing into poetry now πŸ˜‰


  1. Haha.. It’s okay.. Don’t get frustrated yaar… We’ve all been through that.. It will get better when you keep repeating it innumerable times in the next few years..
    And what’s with sir and all.. you don’t have to address a blogger friend that way πŸ™‚


      1. Haha.. You know what,you can just say Aks πŸ˜‰
        Anyways enjoy your time in first year,enjoy concepts in physiology( not sure this is the right place to say such stuff but couldn’t resist atleast for physio πŸ˜‰ ) nice piece of writing too! Keep blogging! Keep studying! Stay blessed πŸ™‚


  2. Title suits lines
    awesomely used words with perfectness in each line !


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